1. 直接引语的例子有哪些
①The girl said,"I'msorry for being late for class."
→The girl said that shewassorry for being late for class.
那姑娘说对不起她上课迟到了
②My mother said to me,"Your classmateis waitingfor you in the sitting room."
→My mother told me that my classmatewas waitingfor me in the sitting room.
我母亲告诉我,我的同学正在客厅等我。
③She said, "Ihave seenthe film Titanic."
→She said that she had seenthe film Titanic.
她说她看过了电影《泰坦尼克号》
④Li Hua said to me,"Your parents havebeen lookingfor you."
→Li Hua told me that my parents had been lookingfor me.
李华告诉我,我的父母正在找我。
⑤He said,"Imadesome spelling mistakes yesterday."
→He said that hehadmadesome spelling mistakes the day before.
他说他前一天出了一些拼写错误。
(1)电影引语怎么写扩展阅读
如果主句的谓语动词为现在时态,则间接引语的时态可不必改变(即用所需要的任何时态)。
在将直接引语改为间接引语时,人称(物主)代词的变化规律有如下几种:
(1)当主句的主语是第一人称时,引语中的人称(物主)代词不变。
(2)直接引语中主语是第一人称时,在改为间接引语时,其人称与主句中的主语的人称一致。
(3)直接引语中主语是第二人称时,在改为间接引语时,其人称和主句的宾语相一致。
2. 张林告诉我,说:“要是星期日下雨,我们就不去看电影。”改成间接引语
张林告诉我:"要是星期日下雨,我们就不去看电影."改为间接引语
张林告诉我,要是星期日下雨,我们就不去看电影.
这种题不难做,加油!
3. 什么是间接引语和直接引语啊
引述某人的话一般采用两种形式:一种是直接引语(Direct Speech),即原封不动地引用原话,把它放在引号内;另一种是间接引语(Indirect Speech),即用自己的话加以转述,被转述的内容不放在引号内。
一、 直接引语变间接引语
A. 陈述句的间接引语
直接引语是陈述句,变为间接引语时,在多数情况下都构成一个that引导的宾语从句,引述动词通常是say, tell等。与此同时,间接引语中的人称、时态和其他方面也要相应有所变化。
The foreigner aid to me, I like Beijing very much.那老外告诉我:我很喜欢北京。
→ The foreigner told me that he she liked Beijing very much. 那老外告诉我说他(她)很喜欢北京。
She said,We are very fond of sports. 她说:我们都喜欢体育运动。
→ She said that they were very fond of sports. 她说他(她)们都喜欢体运动。
I'll go over the grammar lesson once again,he said. 他说:我将把语法课再复习一遍。
→ He said he would go over the grammar lesson once again. 他说他将要把语法课再复习一遍。(that可省略)
B. 疑问句的间接引语
1.一般疑问句和反意疑问句
一般疑问句改为间接引语时,要用陈述语序,并要加连词if 或 whether,其主句动词常用ask, wonder, wantto know, didn't know等。句末不用问号。
My teacher asked me, Do you like American country music 我老师问我:你喜欢美国乡村音乐吗?
→ My teacher asked me ifwhether I liked American country music. 我老师问我是否喜欢美国乡村音乐。
You haven't been to Beijing, have you asked he. 他问:你没去过北,是吗?
→ He asked me ifwhether I had been to Beijing. 他问我是否去过北京。
2.否定的一般疑问句和选择问句
如果直接引语为否定的一般问句或选择疑问句时,用whether�or 连接。
She said, Don't you know my telephone number 她说:你难道不知道我的电话号码吗?
→ She asked me whether I knew her telephone number or not. 她问我是知道她的电话号码。
Do you like this one or that one Tom asked. 汤姆问:你是喜欢这个还是那个?
→ Tom asked me whether I liked this one or that one. 汤姆问我是喜欢这个还是那个。
3.特殊疑问句
间接引语为特殊疑问句时,间接引语前仍然用特殊疑问词作为连词引导宾语从句,注意从句必须用陈述语序,主句谓语动词常用ask。
He asked, How do you like it 他问:你觉得怎样?
→ He asked me how I liked it. 他问我觉得它怎样。
She asked me, What's the matter with you 她问我:你怎么啦?
→ She asked me what was the matter with me. 她问我我怎么啦。
How many books do you have she asked. 她问:你有多少本书?
→ She asked me how many books I had. 她问我有多少本。
4.其它
英语中有些疑问句并非提出疑问,而是表示请求、劝告、建议等。这种疑问句变为间接引语时,往往采用其他的形式。
①.suggest doing
Shall we all go to the film tonight said Michael. 迈克尔说:我们今晚都去看电影,好吗?
→ Michael suggested going to the film tonight. 迈克尔建议今晚都去看电影。
What about having a drink he asked. 他问:喝杯怎么样?
He suggested having a drink. 他建议喝一杯。
②.advise sb to do
Why don't you go hiking asked James. 詹姆士问:你为什么不徒步旅行?
James advised me to go hiking. 詹姆士建议我去徒步旅行。
③. offer to do
He said, Would you like me to post the letter 他说:你要我寄信吗?
He offered to ost the letter. 他主动提出寄信。
④.ask sb to do
Will you please bring your reference book here tomorrow she said to me. 她对我说:劳驾你明天把你的参考书带来好吗?
→ She asked me to take my reference book there the next day. 她让我第二天把我的参考书带去。
C. 祈使句的间接引语
1.直接引语为祈使句时,间接引语往往用复合宾来表示,其结构为主语+谓语+宾语+宾语补足语(动词不定式)。引述动词可根据口气选用tell, ask, order, command, request等词,句中please去掉。
She said to me, Please have a rest. 她对我说:请休息一下。
→ She asked me to have a rest. 她要求我休息一下。
Don't all answer at once, she said to the pupils. 她对学生说:大家不要齐声回答。→ She told the pupils not to answer all at once. 她叫学生不要齐声回答。
2.带有let的祈使句(表示请求,建议或命令),可用suggest + -ing形式或suggest +that从句来表示其相应的意思。
Let's go for a walk, said the girl. 那姑娘说,让我们去散散步吧。
→ The girl suggested going for a walk. 这女孩建议去散散步。
The teacher sai, Let Lily tidy the classroom. 老师说:让莉莉整理教室。
→ The teacher suggested that Lily should tidy the classroom. 老师建议让莉莉整理教室。
D. 感叹句的间接引语
1.直接引语是感叹句变为间接引语时,多采用宾语从句结构,既可用what或how引导,也可用that引导。
What a clever boy you are!my teacher said to him. 老师对他说,你是个聪明的孩子啊!
→ My teacher told him what a clever boy he was. 老师对他说他是一个多聪明的孩子啊。
→ My teacher told him that he was a very clever boy. 老师说他是一个非常聪明的孩子。
He said, How well you look! 他说:你看起来气色多好啊!
→ He said how well I looked. 他说我看起来是气色多好啊。
→ He said that I ooked very well. 他说我看起来气色很好。
2.有些感叹句可以根据原句的意思,采用适当的动词变为陈述句,不需用间接宾语来转述。
Help! he cried. 他喊到:救命啊!
→ He called for help. 他大声呼救。
What terrible weather it is!he said. 他说:多么糟糕的天气!
→ He complained about the terrible weather. 他抱怨这糟糕的天气。
Happy Chrismas! he said. 他说:圣诞快乐!
He wished me a happy Christmas. 他祝我圣诞快乐。
直接引语变为间接引语时,间接引语中的动词时态、人称代词、物主代词、指示代词、时间和地点状语以及主谓语词序往往要作相应的变化。
A. 时态的变化
1.时态的变化
①现在时间推移到过去时间
直接引语中的时态
一般现在时
现在完成时
现在进行时
现在完成进行时
间接引语中的时态
一般过去时
过去完成时
过去进行时
过去完成进行时
The old man said, I have lived in this street since 1960.
→The old man said that he had lived in that street since 1960. 那老人说他自从196年起就住在那条街上了。
He said, Is it raining
→ He asked if it was raining. 他问是不是正在下雨。
②过去时间推移到过去的过去
直接引语中的时态
一般过去时
过去完成时
过去进行时
间接引语中的时态
过去完成时
过去完成时(不变)
过去完成进行时或不变
She said to me, I wrote a letter to my parents three days ago.
→She told me that she had written a letter to her parents three days before.她告诉我她三天前已给她母亲写了一封信。
What were you doing at seven p.m. yesterday he asked
→ He asked me what I was doing at seven p.m. the day before. 他问我前一天晚上七点在干什么。
③将来时间推移到过去将来时间
直接引语中的时态
一般将来时
isamare going to do
isamare to do
间接引语中的时态
过去将来时
waswere going to do
waswere to do
He said, We shall get ready by eight o'clock.
→He said that they ould get ready by eight o'clock. 他说他们将在8点前准备好。
We are to meet at the school gate, she said to me.
→ Sh told me that they were to meet at the school gate. 她告诉我他们约定在校门口见面。
④间接引语中保持原来时态不变
在下列情况下,间接引语中的谓语动词时态可以保持不变。
a. 主句为现在时或将来时,间接引语的时态保持不变。
He thinks, She will be back in a month.
→ He thinks she will be back in a month. 他想她将在一个月后回来。
He says, I have accepted her invitation.
He says he has accepted her invitation. 他说他已接受了她的邀请。
比较:
间接引语中的谓语动词时态对比。
Sarah said to me,I have two brothers. 莎莎对我说:“我有两个弟弟。”
Sarah told me that she has two brothers. 莎莎告诉我说她有两个弟弟。(说话才认为这情况是真实的)
Sarah told me that she had two brothers. 莎拉告诉我说她有两个弟弟。(说话者对此没有什么把握)
b. 间接引语表示的是现在的习惯动作、科学真理、客观事实、格言等。
The geography teacher said to the students, The earth moves round the sun.
→ Th geography teacher told the students that the earth moves round the sun. 老师告诉学生地球围绕太阳转。
He said, Every dog has his day.
→ He said that every dog has his day. 他说是人皆有出头日。
c. 间接引语中动词表示的动作说话时仍在进行或状态仍然存在,时态可保持不变。
He said,The window is brokn.
→ He said that the window is broken.他说玻璃窗碎了。
Just now Brown said, My son is ill today.
→ Brown told me just now that his son is ill today. 布朗刚才告诉我说,他儿子今天病了。
d. 间接引语中有明确的过去时间状语,仍可用一般过去时,不必改为过去完成时。
The girl said, Iwas born in 1978.
→ The girl said that she was born in 1978.那女孩说她生于1978年。
She said, My teacher was busy yesterday.
→ She said that her teacher was busy yesterday. 她说她老师昨天很忙。
2.情态动词的变化
情态动词在间接引语中都可以改为过去式,must表示必、推测、禁止等意思时,可不变;表示必须时可不变,也可用had to 或would have to。
The senior said, All men must die.
→ The senior said that all men must die. 那老者说人总是要死的。
She said, I must go to see the doctor tomorrow afternoon.
→ She saidshe mustwould have to go to see the doctor the next afternoon. 她说第二天下午她一定得去看医生。
He said to me, We used to go there every year.
→ He toldme that they used to come here every year. 他对我说他们过去每年都来这里。(used to在间接引语中不变)
B. 代词的变化
1.人称代词的变化
①当主句的主语是第一人称时,引语中的人称代词不变。
I said, You did quite well in the exam yesterday.
→ I said that you had done quite well in the exam the day before.我说你那天考得不错。
②直接引语中主语是第一人称时,在改为间接引语时,其人称与主句中的主语的人称一致。
He said to Tom, I'll do my best to catch up with others.
→ He told Tom that he would do his best to catch up with others. 他告诉汤姆他将尽他所能赶上其他人。
③直接引语中主语是第二人称时,在改为间接引语时,其人称和主句的宾语相一致。
He said to her, Where did you put the glasses
→ He asked her where she had put the glasses. 他问她,她把杯子放哪儿了。
提示:
如果主句中无宾语,应根据语境或想象,自添适当的宾语;如果直接引语中有呼语,则将其改为间接引语的宾语。
Mother asked, Where have you been
→ Moher asked me where I had been. 母亲问我去哪儿了。
Why are you late again, John the teacher asked.
→ The teacher asked John why he was late again. 老师问约翰为什么他又迟到。
④直接引语中主语是第三人称时,在改为间接引语时不发生变化。
He said to Tom, She can help them.
→ He told Tom that she could help them. 他告诉汤姆她能够帮助他们。
2.物主代词的变化
You should not overlook your fault, Mum said to me.
→ Mum told me that I should not overlook my fault. 妈妈对我说我不应该忽略我的缺点。
The two boys said, We have lost ur dog.
→ The two boys said they had lost their dog. 这两个男孩说他们的狗丢了。
3.指示代词的变化
直接引语中的指示代词
this
these
间接引语中的指示代词
that
those
She said, This is the house in which Lu Xun once lived.
→ She said that that wa the house in which Lu Xun had once lived. 她说那是鲁迅曾经住过的房子。
I bought these flowers for you, Jane said.
Jane said that she had bought those flowers for me. 简说那些花是她为我买的。
I grow these tomatoes myself, he said.
→ He aid that he grew those tomatoes himself. 他说那些胡萝卜是他自己种的。
C. 时间和地点状语的变化
1.时间状语的变化
He said, I spoke to them yesterday.
→ He said that h had spoken to them the day before. 他说他前一天跟他们讲过话了。
The student said,We have learned about 3,000 English words so far.
→ The student said that they had learned about 3,000 English words by then. 那学生说到那时为止他们已学会了3,000个英语单词。
2.地点状语的变化
当直接引语变间引语时,地点状语here通常变为there。但如果说话人所在地点就是引述人所在地点,那么仍然使用here.
Come here, please, he said.
→ He asked me to come here. 他叫我到这里来。(引述人地点不变)
→ He asked me to go there. 他叫我到那里去。(引述人地点发生变化)
Here she burst out into a flood of tears, he said to me.
→ He told me that she had burst out into a flood of tears there. 他告诉我说,谈到那个地方她就放声大哭了起来。
4. 如何写电影剧本(格式 结构等)需要掌握什么知识
1:把剧本写成了小说
刚刚上面提到有的朋友把剧本写成了小说,不是不可以,但那个是文 学剧本,根本不能用来指导拍摄和制作。举个例子,你可以在小说里花几页的笔墨来写一个人的身世,背景,家庭组成,或是用几页的笔墨来描写主角的心理斗争过程,但这些东西是无法表现在电影屏幕上的。你的剧本就是一个屏幕,你所要表现的是电影屏幕上能被观众直接看到感受到的东西。像心理活动这类东西是无法很好 的表现出来的。加旁白?当然可以,除非你能忍受主角的画外音在一动不动的镜头里读几页小说。电影*画面表达情绪,你的剧本就是电影画面,要通过摄像机的角度来写,这可能引起第二个问题。
2:不必要的摄象机标注
如果你这样写剧本:在5号升降台,用盘纳为升70型相机,60mm镜头,由 8.5m摇至2m对焦…………如果你这样写,就算过了审稿人这一关,你的剧本也会被导演扔掉。你不需要教他怎么拍,这不是你的事。你在写剧本的时候完全不用担心相机的事。但是不是剧本就不要考虑相机了呢?也不是,你需要考虑相机的关系而不是位置。剧本里有自己的专用相机术语,多多使用这些术语,能让你的剧 本很专业,至少看上去很专业。
1.Angle on 角度对准:比如BILL走出便利店,相机对准BILL。
2.Favoring 主要表现:BILL在一个大广场,人很多,但主要表现BILL。
3.Another angle 另一个角度:换个角度的相机表现BILL在大广场玩的很开心。
4.Wilder angle 更宽的角度:先表现BILL在广场的一角喝可乐,然后镜头拉远,表现BILL所在的广场。
5.New angle 新角度:换个角度表现BILL喝可乐,使镜头丰富。
6.POV 视点:从BILL的视点看东西。就是第一人称视角。
7.Reverse angle 反拍角度:BILL和SALLY在一起跳舞,先拍BILL看到的SALLY,再拍SALLY看到的BILL,通常是两人的POV互反。
8.Over shoulder angle 过肩镜头:相机越过BILL的肩头看到SALLY,BILL的肩头能把画面自然的分割,很常用的类型。
9.Moving shot 运动镜头:包括跟拍,摇移,追随等等,反正镜头是运动的,至于具体怎么动,还不是现在考虑的问题。
10.Two shot 双人镜头:BILL和SALLY在边喝可乐边交谈,这种镜头的相机不要随意移动,防止“越轴”。把BILL和SALLY两人连起来有一条轴线,相机只能在轴线一侧运动,如果越过这条轴线,在画面上BILL和SALLY的位置就会左右互换,引起观众视觉上的逻辑混淆。
11.Close shot 近景:强调SALLY美丽的眼睛,但一般少用为妙。
12.Insert 插入镜头:某物的近景,比如天色已晚,SALLY问BILL几点了,BILL抬起手来,接下来可以接一个BILL手表的特写,当然你还可以用此种镜头来换景,比如BILL移开手表时摄象机里看到的已经是夜晚的舞会了。
以上就是剧本里的镜头描写格式,看个例子就明白了。
这是具体的写作格式:
场景说明要黑体,时间地点要黑体,居左
场景中出现的音效要黑体标出
第一次出现的人物名要黑体居中
人物的对话要居中,两边留空,不同人物的对话要另起一行
标明摄象机的关系
标明场景的切换,“切至”就是硬切,“化至”就是加转场的效果,全部居右
如有特效运用,也要用黑体标出
二、剧本写作入门
这是我在大学修读剧本写作课程时所得到的体会。记得当年导师和我们说:「要想写好剧本,就必须懂得剧本的基本知识和理论,搞明白电影的规律!」
今天,身为其中的一员,有幸和大家分享一下我所懂得的剧本理论知识,如有错漏,还望大家多多包容。
简单来说,要写好一个故事,首先要构思好你的故事走向,人物关系,情节高潮,主题思想等…… 美国好莱坞有一套编剧规律:即开端、设置矛盾、解决矛盾、再设置矛盾,直至结局。中国也有自己的编剧规律:起、承、转、合。
在下面的文字,本人会分类将写作剧本的基本和重要的元素详加论述,并会举出实例加以说明。
< 第 一 节 > 剧本基本理论 :态度、主题
态度 (Attitude)
写 故事最重要的是对故事的态度,不同的态度会产生不同的效果。举一个简单的例子,同样是写一个青楼女子的故事,如果作者是以一个淫秽、色情的态度去写,故事 自然集中于男女之间欢爱的部份。相反,如果作者是以一个同情、尊重的态度去写,故事便会集中于描写青楼女子被迫卖身,身不由己的可怜、无奈……
主题 (Theme)
在 下笔写故事之前,你必须要问自己:你要讲一个怎样的故事?是朋友之间的友情(如电影午夜牛郎—midnight cow boy),男女之间的爱情(铁达尼号—Titanic),外星人入侵地球的故事(天煞地球反击战),还是一个控诉战争的故事(杀戮战场—platon) 等。这就是主题。
主题必须十分明确、贯彻、毫不怀疑。你不能写一套战争片段,一时就怀疑战争,一时就歌颂战争。主题有如一支指南针,它会引导 你创作故事,和贯穿故事中的枝节。而最重要的是它能避免你在写作中偏离主道。试举一例,清朝皇帝雍正在野史是一个杀弟、杀父夺位,强奸弟弟妻子的禽兽。但在雍正皇朝(早期亚视播出的电视剧)作者笔下的雍正,却是一个好皇帝。因为作者的主题是要写一个好皇帝,所以在故事中只会见到雍正彻夜不眠批奏章、视察农 民、减税、推行德政等场面,并没有杀弟、杀父等场面。
所以,一套成功的剧本是要让观众看完后,清楚明白作者想表达的思想和主题。
< 第 二 节 > 创造角色冲突 (create character conflict)
角色冲突是吸引观众的不二法门。这包括故事角色和角色之间的冲突,角色和他自身价值观的冲突等。
方法一: Potogonist Vs Antogonist
故事里的人物想做一些事,但有一股力量抗衡他,这就是Potogonist /Antogonist
例 如电影怒火风暴(Falling Down)故事中,主角刚刚经历完痛苦的劳狱生涯,当他出狱时,他一心想见回自己的妻子,重过正常人的生活(Potogonist,他想追求的事)。但他的妻子逃避他,不认他,而四周的人也因他的犯罪纪录而歧视他(Antogonist,阻止他达到目的的力量)。
方法二: 不能分解的关系 (unbreakable bonding)
当 角色和角色之间存在冲突,而且有一个不能分开的结把他们拉在一起,好戏便来了。举一个简单的例子,男主角的妻子是个三姑六婆、八卦的女人,而男主角的母亲 则是个守礼节的传统妇女。因为环境的因素,主角和他的妻子必须搬进家里和妈妈一起住。试想两个完全冲突的人:媳妇和奶奶被一个 unbreakable bond 拉在一起时,会是怎样。
< 第 三 节 > 创造表面张力 (create dramatic tension)
方法一: 让你的观众知道一些事而故事中的角色是不知道的
例如故事中的主角闯进了敌人的基地,有支枪在黑暗处伸出来瞄准着他(观众知道但主角不知道),敌人就快要开枪了,观众也为主角担心。
方法二: 让你的观众感到故事中的角色是走在一条错误的路上
主 角的母亲病了,他全身家只有一百元,于是他便去睹场碰碰运气。很好运地,主角不停地赢钱,已有几千元,有足够的医药费了。但他竟然贪胜不知输,继续赌下 去,结果输了一局又一局(观众已知他已走在一条错误的路上)。最后连手上的一百元也输了,竟然还去问大耳窿借钱(他用错误的方法企图达到目的)。
方法三: 时间限制 (deadline)
故事中某些事件若存着时间的限制,或计时炸弹,能够给观众一股紧张的情绪,并且这股紧张情绪能维持一段长时间。
还有十二个小时,陨石便会撞击地球,地球上超过一半的生物会死亡。(电影--陨石撞地球)
这辆巴士必须维持在时速一百二十公理,否则车上的炸弹便会爆炸。(电影--生死时速)
方法四:转折点 (Turning Point)
使用转折点能制造意外的效果,引起观众的预期心理,加强情节张力,从而持续观众对故事的兴趣。转折点最常出现于故事的前段和后段。剧本前段的转折点一般用于开启故事和陈列出主角即将面临的各项选择。至于后段的转折点则指向主角解决危机,收拢故事。
例 如著名电影「生于七月四日」(Born on the fourth of July),主角在故事开始面临第一个转折点:是否要参加越战。主角最后选择参战,走上战场。但好景不常,在战争中主角被打破了双脚,要终生坐轮椅。原本爱国主战的他经历了多件事件后,改变了他的想法。导致故事结局出现了很出人意表的转折点,他由主战派变成反战派,从而带出反战的主题。
< 第 四 节 > 其它技巧
伏笔 (Planting)
相信有作文的人都会知道什么叫做伏笔吧!埋下伏线可以吸引观众追看剧情。例如在电影心计中,主角汤美一早便表露了他有模仿人签名和行为的能力(伏线),到故事发展到他杀了有钱人迪奇后,观众凭借伏线已经估到主角会假冒迪奇。
关键匙 (Payoff)
所谓 Payoff,就是最能象征整个故事的对象。例如在电影”Apartment”中,那条门匙就是Payoff。又如著名电影「舒特拉的名单」中,那张犹太人的名单也是Payoff。
蒙太奇 (montage)
有两个画面,梅花间竹地播出,这就是蒙太奇。例如在电影教父中,画面一边播出教会里正在举行的神圣仪式,如神父替孩子洗礼,向天主祈祷等。但另一边画面却转接地播出教会中邪恶的一面,例如教会中的领袖为求夺权,去反对他的人的住所,不停地大开杀戒。
蒙 太奇亦可以指一些不同而没有关系的画面,当他们剪接在一起的时候,会产生另一种意义,简单来说,如第一画面中有一只手正在投球,而另一画面是另外一只手接 到一个球,然而球不见得是同一个,但当两个画面前在一起的时候,就是一个人把球投给另外一个人,注意/若中间再加入另外的画面,这意思就完全不一样了!! (注:这一段蒙太奇的文字解释由网友「贝戈」提供)
< 第 五 节 > 剧本三大忌
写剧本变写小说
剧 本写作和小说写作是两样完全不同的事,要知道写剧本的目的是要用文字去表达一连串的画面,所以你要让看剧本的人见到文字而又能够实时联想到一幅图画,将他 们带到动画的世界里。小说就不同,他除了写出画面外,更包括抒情句子,修辞手法和角色内心世界的描述。这些在剧本里是不应有的。举一个简单的例子,在小说里有这样的句子:
「 今天会考放榜,同学们都很紧张地等待结果,小明别过父母后,便去学校领取成绩通知书。老师派发成绩单,小明心里想:如果这次不合格就不好了。
他十分担心,害怕考试失败后不知如何面对家人……』
试想,如果将上面的句子写在剧本里,你叫演员看了怎样用动作去表达。
如果要用剧本去表达同样的意思,就只有写成如下:
「 在课室里面,学生都坐在座位上,脸上带着紧张的表情,看着站在外面的老师。老师手上拿着一叠成绩通知书,她看了看面头的一张,叫道:「陈大雄!」大雄立刻 走出去领取成绩单。小明在课室的一角,两只手不停地搓来搓去。他看出课室外面,画面渐渐返回当日早上时的情景。小明的父母一早就坐在大厅上,小明穿好校服,准备出门,看了看父亲,又看了看母亲,见到他们严肃的脸孔,不知该说些什么。小明的父亲说:「会合格吗?」小明说:「会……会的。」
「陈小明!」老师宏亮的声音把小明从回忆中带回现实。老师手上拿着小明的成绩单看着他,小明呆了一会,才快步走出去领取……』
用说话去交待剧情
剧 本里不宜有太多的对话(除非是剧情的需要),否则整个故事会变得不连贯,缺乏动作,观众看起来就似听读剧本一样,好闷。要知道你现在要写的是电影语言,而 不是文学语言。只适合于读而不适合于看的便不是好剧本。所以,一部优秀的电影剧本,对白越少,画面感就越强,冲?力就越大。
举一个简单的例子,比如你写一个人打电话,你最好不要让他坐在电话旁不动,只顾说话。如果剧情需要,可让他站起来,或拿着电话走几步,尽量避免画面的呆板和单调。
故事太多枝节
很多人写剧本都写得太多枝节,在枝节中有很多的角色,穿插了很多的场口,使故事变得复杂化,观众可能会看得不明白,不清楚作者想表达什么主题。试想如果在一幕电影中同时有十几个重要的角色,角色之间又有很多故事,你叫观众在短短时间里那能把每一个角色记得这么清楚。
其 实,写剧本有一句格言:「 Simple is the best! 」愈简单的故事就愈好。大家想想你们所看过的好电影中,它们的剧情是不是都很简单。例如电影铁达尼号(Titanic)只是讲一艘大船下沉,而下沉当中男女主角产生了爱情。其它电影也一样,简单到报纸短评用短短几十个字就能讲出故事大纲。
但是,简单永远是最困难的:「 Simple is difficult。」
5. 张红说今天下雨我不去看电影用间接引语怎么说
张红说:“今天下雨,我不去看电影。”
改为间接引语:
张红说,今天下雨,他(她)不去看电影。
6. 电影的英文怎么写
Film
读音:英[fɪlm];美[fɪlm]
意思:n.电影;薄膜;胶卷;vt.把 ... 拍成电影;给 ... 覆上一薄层;拍照片;vi.变朦胧;拍摄电影
1、film用作名词的基本意思是“影片,电影”,还可表示用来拍照的“胶片,胶卷”。引申可表示“薄层,薄膜”。
2、film作“影片,电影”解是可数名词,有时可用作定语; 作“胶片,胶卷”解时,既可用作可数名词,也可用作不可数名词; 作“薄层,薄膜”解是不可数名词,但其前可用不定冠词修饰,常与of连用。
(6)电影引语怎么写扩展阅读:
近义词:
picture
读音:英['pɪktʃə(r)];美['pɪktʃər]
意思:n.照片;影片;描述;图画;vt.想像;画;拍照
1、picture的基本意思是“画,图画”,可指各种图片及照片,是可数名词。
2、picture可作“(生动的)描述,写照”解,通常指语言文字的生动描述,常用作单数形式,与不定冠词连用。
3、picture在口语中可作“影片,电影”解,是可数名词。
7. 张林告诉我:“要是星期日下雨,我们就不去看电影。”(改为间接引语)
张林告诉我,要是星期日下雨,我们就不去看电影了。
把直接引述句改写成间接转述的句子要做到三改一不改:
1.
改换人称,将对话中表示“谁”的人称代词(如“我”“你”“我们”等)改成“他”或“他们”。
2.
改动标点,将冒号改成逗号,双引号去掉。
3.
适当地调整词语,使语句通顺。
4.不改变句子的原意。
8. 直接引语和间接引语的语法
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引述或转述别人的话称为“引语”。直接引用别人的原话,两边用引号“ ”标出,叫做直接引语;用自己的语言转述别人的话,不需要引号这叫做间接引语,实际上间接引语大都是宾语从句(其中由祈使句转换的间接引语除外,其转换后是不定式)。那么直接引语为陈述句、一般疑问句、特殊疑问句和祈使句,转换为间接引语时,句子的结构,人称、时态、时间状语和地点状语等都要有变化,如何变化呢?
1、人称的转变
1)直接引语中的第一人称,一般转换为第三人称,如:
He said,“I am very sorry.” ——>He said that he was very sorry.
2)直接引语中的第二人称,如果原话是针对转述人说的,转换为第一人称,如:
“You should be more careful next time,” my father told me.——>
My father told me that I should be more careful the next time.
3)直接引语中的第二人称,如果原话是针对第三人称说的,转换成第三人称。如:
She said to her son, “I'll check your homework tonight.” ——>
She said to her son that she would check his homework that night.
4)人称的转换包括人称代词、物主代词和名词性物主代词等,如:
He asked me, “Will you go to the station with me to meet a friend of mine this afternoon?” ——>
He asked me whether I would go to the station with him to meet a friend of his that afternoon.
总之,人称的转换不是固定的,具体情况,具体对待,要符合逻辑。
2、时态的转换
直接引语改为间接引语时,主句中的谓语动词如果是过去时,从句(即间接引语部分)的谓语动词在时态方面要作相应的变化,变成过去时范畴的各种时态(实际也是宾语从句的时态要求),变化如下:
直接引语 间接引语
一般现在时 一般过去时
一般过去时 过去完成时
现在进行时 过去进行时
现在完成时 过去完成时
过去完成时 过去完成时
过去进行时 过去进行时
一般将来时 过去将来时
例如:
“I am very glad to visit your school”, she said. ——>
She said she was very glad to visit our school.
Tom said, “We are listening to the pop music.” ——>
Tom said that they were listening to the pop music.
Mother asked, “Have you finished your homework before you watch TV?” ——>
Mother asked me whether I had finished my homework before I watched TV.
He asked the conctor, “Where shall I get off to change to a No. 3 bus?” ——>
He asked the conctor where he would get off to change to a No. 3 bus.
“Why did she refuse to go there?” the teacher asked. ——>
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The teacher asked why she had refused to go there.
Mother asked me, “Had you finished your homework before you watched TV?” ——>
Mother asked me whether I had finished my homework before I watched TV.
Tom said, “We were having a football match this time yesterday.” ——>
Tom said that they were having a football match that time the day before.
He said,“I haven't heard from my parents these days.” ——>
He said that he hadn't heard from his parents those days.
3、直接引语变成间接引语时,从句时态无须改变的情况
1)当主句的谓语动词是一般现在时的时候,如:
He always says, “I am tired out.” ——>He always says that he is tired out.
2)当主句的谓语动词是将来时的时候,如:
He will say, “I’ll try my best to help you.” ——>He will say that he will try his best to help me.
3)当直接引语部分带有具体的过去时间状语时,如:
He said, “I went to college in 1994.” ——>He told us that he went to college in 1994.
4)当直接引语中有以when, while引导的从句,表示过去的时间时,如:
He said,“When I was a child, I usually played football after school.” ——>
He said that when he was a child, he usually played football after school.
5)当直接引语是客观真理或自然现象时,如:
Our teacher said to us, “Light travels faster than sound.” ——>
Our teacher told us that light travels faster than sound.
6)当引语是谚语、格言时,如:
He said,“Practice makes perfect.” ——>He said that practice makes perfect.
7)当直接引语中有情态动词should, would, could, had better, would rather, might, must, ought to, used to, need时,如:
例如:
The doctor said, “You'd better drink plenty of water.” ——>
The doctor said I'd better drink plenty of water.
He said, “She must be a teacher.”——> He said that she must be a teacher.
He said, “She ought to have arrived her office by now.”——>
He said that she ought to have arrived her office by then.
The teacher said, “You needn't hand in your compositions today.”——>
The teacher said we needn't/didn't need to/didn't have to hand in our compositions.
She asked, “Must I take the medicine?”——> She asked if she had to take the medicine.
〔注〕:此处用had to代替must更好 8)此外转述中的变化要因实际情况而定,不能机械照搬,如果当地转述,here不必改为there, 动词come不必改为go,如果当天转述yesterday, tomorrow, this afternoon等均不必改变。如:
Teacher: You may have the ball game this afternoon.
Student : What did the teacher say, Monitor?
Monitor: He said we might have the ball game this afternoon.
4、时间状语、地点状语及某些对比性的指示代词和动词变化
1)时间状语:
直接引语 间接引语 直接引语 间接引语
now (then); tomorrow (the next / following day )
today (that day); next week (the next / following week / month / year)
yesterday(the day before) two days ago( two days before )
last week /month/ year (the week/month/ year before) this week/month/year (that week/month/ year)
2)指示代词:these 变成those
3)地点状语:here变成there
She said, “I won't come here any more.”——> She said that she wouldn’t go there any more..
4)动词:come变成go,bring变成take
5、直接引语变成间接引语,句子结构的变化
1)陈述句。用连词that引导,that在口语中常省略。主句的谓语动词可直用接引语中的said, 也可用told来代替,注意,可以说said that, said to sb. that, told sb. that,不可直接说told that, 如:
He said, “I have been to the Great Wall.” ——>He said to us that he had been to the Great Wall.
He said, “I'll give you an examination next Monday.”——>
He told us that he would give us an examination the next Monday.(不可说told that)
此外主句中的谓语还常有:
repeat, whisper, answer, reply, explain, announce, declare, think等,又如:
He said,“I'm late because of the heavy traffic.”——> He explained to us that he was late because of the heavy traffic.
如果间接引语是由that引导的两个或两个以上的并列从句,第一个连词可以省略,以后的连词一般不省略,以免混乱。
The doctor said, “You are not seriously ill, You will be better soon.”——>
The doctor said(that)I was not seriously ill and that I would be better soon.
2)直接引语为一般疑问句,(也称是否疑问句,)间接引语用连词whether或if引导,原主句中谓语动词said要改为asked(me/him/us等),语序是陈述句的语序,这一点非常重要。
He said, “Do you have any difficulty with pronunciation?”——>
He asked(me)whether/if I had any difficulty with my pronunciation.
He said, “You are interested in English, aren't you?”——>
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He asked whether I was interested in English.
3) 直接引语为选择疑问句,间接引语用whether…or…表达,而不用if…or…,也不用either…or…. 如:
He asked, “Do you speak English or French?”——>
He asked me whether I spoke English or French..
I asked, “Will you take bus or take train?”——>
I asked him whether he would take bus or take train.
4)直接引语为特殊疑问句,改成间接引语时,原来的疑问词作为间接引语的连词,主句的谓语动词用ask(sb.)来表达,语序改为陈述句语序。如:
He asked,“What's your name?”——> He asked(me)what my name was.
He asked us, “How many car factories have been built in your country?”——>
He asked us how many car factories had been built in our country.
5)直接引语为祈使句时,改为间接引语,用带to的不定式表达,谓语动词常是ask, advise, tell, warn, order, request等。如ask sb. to do,(由肯定祈使句变成)ask sb. not to do(由否定祈使句转变),并且在不定式短语中的时间状语、地点状语、人称及时态都作相应的变化。如:
He said,“Be seated, please.”——> He asked us to be seated.
“Do be careful with your handwriting.” He said. ——>
He told me to be careful with my handwriting.
“Never come here again!” said the officer nearby. ——>
The officer ordered the villagers never to go there again.
“Don't touch anything in the lab without permission,” the teacher said. ——>
The teacher warned the students not to touch anything in the lab without permission.
6)有些含有“建议”——>、“劝告”——>的祈使句,可用suggest, insist, offer等动词转述,如:
He said, “Let's have a rest.”——> He suggested our having a rest.
He said, “Let me help you.”——> He offered to help me.
7)当直接引语形式上是疑问句,有表示请求,建议意义时,可用ask sb. to do sth. /suggest doing/advise sb. to do sth. 等形式转述。如:
“Would you mind opening the door?” he asked. ——>He asked me to open the door.
“Why not going out for a walk?” he asked us. ——>
He advised us to go out for a walk. 或He suggested we go out for a walk.
8)直接引语是感叹句时,变间接引语可用what或how引导,也可用that引导,如:
She said, “What a lovely day it is!”——> She said what a lovely day it was. 或She said that it was a lovely day.
嵌套间接引语的从句:
如果间接引语当中还镶嵌有另一句从句,则被称为嵌套间接引语的从句,英文叫:the subordinate clause in indirect statement。这时,这样的从句要使用虚拟语气。从句动词的时态与主句动词的时态相关联。如:
Dux dicebat militem qui fugisset poenas daturum esse. 统帅曾常说,那个逃跑的士兵将要受到惩罚。
qui fugisset[逃跑] 是一句关系从句,修饰militem “士兵”,由于处在dicebat [说]后面的间接引语当中,因此需使用虚拟语气。间接引语的动词是不定式 daturum esse[将受到],为将来时,因为动作发生在主句动词“说”之后,而 fugisset [逃跑]为虚拟语气的过去完成时,表示在统帅“说话”之前已经逃走了